While I use
Wikipedia regularly to check dates, opus numbers for pieces, correct titles and
countless other bits of information I need for my work but can’t quite be bothered
actually remembering, up until this point I have never edited a Wikipedia
article and I had no idea what was involved in doing so. When I saw we had the
option this week of doing just that, I figured it was time to get over my
hesitation and explore the process.
Before
totally committing to the idea, I wanted to make sure that I felt there was
someplace that I could actually contribute something useful. I looked at the
entries for some of the composers I know well – Elgar, Vaughan Williams, among
others – and topics I deal with, like the English Musical Renaissance. These
were long and complex articles, and most of the ones I looked at I felt had
been well-written and well-vetted. I simply didn’t see any obvious lacunae, and
thought that any contribution would be more political/ideological on my part
than substantive. There is a general sense in academic musicology that it is
part of our “job” to oversee things like Wikipedia entries, and there seems to
be a lot of contribution by my colleagues towards policing things that fall
within our realm of expertise.
Eventually
I got around to looking at the entry on the English Masque – a genre I know
well and from which I drew case studies for my dissertation/monograph - and found that there really was nothing
there drawing attention to the fact that composers continued to write masques
during the 18th and 19th centuries, and then there was an
odd mention of two 20th century masques by Vaughan Williams and
Lambert. I thought I could easily add a paragraph or two, just mentioning that
there is more history there to explore.
The
process of creating an account was ominously easy; the choice of a username
‘scholargardener’ and a password granted me almost universal ability to edit
anything I wanted. Once I had created my account, Wikipedia suggested I
participate in the mundane work of a Wiki of this size by suggesting that I
offer to do editing on articles they recommended by improving clarity, adding
links, or fixing spelling and grammar. I appreciate that people need to do
these things for the system to work, but I was on a mission.
I
chose to return to the Masque entry page, where I had new links and choices on
the top I had never seen before. I had a new notification, welcoming me to
Wikipedia and giving me a link to control my settings, which I had a quick look
at. I had a link for preferences, a “watchlist”, and a “contributions list,”
and an edit and history tab.
I
figured the place to start was with the “history” of the article, since I was
curious what kinds of edits had been done to the article. I have to say, my
expectations were that the article would have been written quite a while ago,
and that there would have been a limited number of edits done by a very limited
number of editors. I was quite surprised, then, to see a very long list of
edits spread over a long period of time. The most recent edits were done in
early September, and there were quite a few edits done in May and June, but
going back several years. I wonder if the article didn’t come up as one of the
“recommended for editing” list, since most of the edits seemed to be about
creating links and importing citations. Again, I was surprised at the number of
people who had worked on the entry, and relatively few of them had worked on it
repeatedly.
At
one point the article had been vandalized, and had been fixed; I didn’t quite
get exactly what had happened. And there were some substantive changes and
comments made that things needed supporting citation. None of it seemed
particularly fractious; this obviously was not a forum for the latest debates
on aspect of the English masque. One feature I found interesting is that you
could question an editor about a particular point or a particular change.
Editing was frequently undone as well!
I
then went back to the entry page and clicked the edit button. I scrolled down
to the end, where I was going to insert some of my own material. The original
section looked like this:
While
no longer popular, there are later examples of the masque. In the 20th century,
[[Ralph Vaughan Williams]] wrote ''[[Job, a masque for dancing]]'' which
premiered in 1930, although the work is closer to a [[ballet]] than a masque as
it was originally understood. His designating it a masque was to indicate that
the modern [[choreography]] typical when he wrote the piece would not be
suitable.
[[Constant
Lambert]] also wrote a piece he called a masque, ''Summer's Last Will and
Testament'', for orchestra, chorus and baritone. His title he took from
[[Thomas Nash]], whose masque<ref>It was a "comedy" when it was
printed, in 1600 as ''A Pleasant Comedie, call'd Summers Last will and Testament''<!--correct
as entered-->, but, as a character announces, "nay, 'tis no Play
neither, but a show." With Nash's stage direction ''"Enter Summer,
leaning on Autumn's and Winter's shoulders, and attended on with a train of
Satyrs and wood-Nymphs, singing: [[Vertumnus]] also following him"'' we
are recognizably in the world of Masque.</ref> was probably first
presented before the [[Archbishop of Canterbury]], perhaps at his London seat,
[[Lambeth Palace]], in 1592.
It took me a few
minutes to figure out what the characters meant and the appropriate Wikipedia
marking indications to use when, eventually figuring out how to do italics and
how to create links to other entries. In the end, I decided on two things.
First, I decided as much as possible not to change what someone else had
written, and instead to try to incorporate their material. So the slightly odd,
tacked on paragraphs about Job and Summer’s Last Will and Testament I left
in, even though I might have talked more generally about VW and Lambert if I
was starting the entry from scratch. Second, I decided not to include
citations. This was such a basic, brief, and general account of the masque
during the 18th and 19th centuries, I thought citations
would be overkill and overly specific for the information contained. I didn’t
want to self-cite, and I didn’t want to open a can of worms by having to offer
long lists of citations for general information. It will be interesting to see
if I get queried about that in the future!
In the end, here
is the new version of that section of the entry:
Later Masques
While the masque was no longer as
popular as it was at its height in the 17th Century, there are many later
examples of the masque. During the late 17th century, English semi-operas by
composers such as Henry
Purcell had masque scenes inset between the acts of the play
proper. In the 18th century, William Boyce
and Thomas
Arne, among other composers, continued to utilize the masque
genre mostly as an occasional piece, and the genre became increasingly associated
with patriotic topics. There are isolated examples throughout the first half of
the 19th century.
With the renaissance of English musical
composition during the late 19th and early 20th century (the so-called English
Musical Renaissance), English composers turned to the
masque as a way of connecting to a genuinely English musical-dramatic form in
their attempts to build a historically-informed national musical style for
England. Examples include those by Arthur
Sullivan, George Macfarren,
and even Edward
Elgar, whose imperialistic Crown of India was the central
feature at the London Coliseum in 1912. Masques also became common as scenes in
operettas and musical theatre works set during the Elizabethan period.
In the 20th century, Ralph
Vaughan Williams wrote several masques, including his
masterpiece in the genre, Job, a masque for dancing
which premiered in 1930, although the work is closer to a ballet
than a masque as it was originally understood. His designating it a masque was
to indicate that the modern choreography
typical when he wrote the piece would not be suitable.
Constant
Lambert also wrote a piece he called a masque, Summer's Last Will and Testament, for orchestra, chorus and
baritone. His title he took from Thomas Nash,
whose masque[3]
was probably first presented before the Archbishop
of Canterbury, perhaps at his London seat, Lambeth Palace,
in 1592.
When I was
finished, I went and checked out the “Watchlist” tab in my commands above, and
noted that the masque article was now on my watchlist. I provided an email
address, which I am presuming means that I will be notified if anyone edits the
entry in the coming weeks. And as a little reward for my efforts, I had my
first entries there for me to see on my “Contributions” list!
I’m
glad I took the opportunity to try this out and look behind the scenes a bit. I
have a much better understanding of how the process works now, and perhaps an
even more heightened sense of anxiety about how fraught the process can be. It
is so incredibly easy to edit anything, and things need to be aggressively
policed for misinformation not to happen. It all comes down to how much people
care, doesn’t it?
Find the entry
at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Masque
Thanks for this carefully detailed account of the process of editing an Wikipedia article. Your last sentence really says it all. Wikipedia bears marks of careful tending--like a garden. So "Scholargardener" really is a perfect name for a Wikipedia editor. Is this a connection to your choice of digital story? Wikipedia is an intellectual garden tended by a collective, and some patches are more cared for than others, that are overrun with weeds.
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